Year 6 Star Writers

In Year 6, our star writers are Lacey Wall and Brandon Cohen. Their balanced arguments about whether animals should be kept in captivity or not were fair and unbiased. Lacey and Brandon included a range of sentence openers to portray the balance and included a variety of important points: including the risk of poaching to animals in the wild and on the other hand, the danger of animals being mistreated in captivity. Well done on very successful pieces of writing Brandon and Lacey!