This week in Elm class, our star writer is Ellis. Throughout his story of 'Pandora's Box', Ellis has used a wide range of sentence openers to draw his reader in and avoiding repetition. His use of imagery and vivid vocabulary has resulted in Ellis writing a piece of narrative full of imagination and wonder.
Ellis' favorite extract.
'I gingerly and gently unlocked the wonderful latch. Hesitantly, I picked up the weighty top when suddenly evil spirits glided out of the box. Once this room was full of joy and happiness but now it was transformed to the deepest depths of darkness.'
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