Javy created a fabulous set of instructions for how to make sherbet, beginning with an enticing introduction full of rhetorical questions to hook his reader in. Using numbered steps and clear bullet points, he ensured his instructions were easy for his reader to follow and also included a range of adverbs of time and manner.
He even managed to include some rhyme in his conclusion!
'There you have it - a scrumptious treat that your family can eat!'
Well done Javy - you should be very proud of your fantastic work!
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