Willow class star writer

Our star writer in Willow Class this week is the very lovely Timi. It is no surprise given the absolutely awesome retell of Achilles' first battle that he produced. Timi used his senses to consider the sight of the battle, the smells, what could be heard and how Achilles would be feeling as he approached Hector! He successfully used a range of openers to vary his writer, embedded similes to build description and used different sentence lengths to create suspense. Keep up the great writing Timi!

'I enjoyed this piece of writing because the story was intense' -Timi