Redwood Star Writer

This week, our star writer in Redwood class is Mason Camden. In Literacy we are beginning to write our own poems and have explored the effect of metaphors within poetry. 

Mason used metaphor to describe Grandad Rabbit (from Rabbit in a Cement Mixer): If Grandad Rabbit were a game, he'd be an old, dusty board game with pieces missing which nobody played with. 

Great job Mason! I can't wait to see how you will describe your sea creature in your own poem.