Friday 19 January 2018

Year 6 Star Writers

This week, our star writers in Year 6 are Tegan Sage in Redwood and Archie Patrick-Stuart from Larch. Both of these pupils impressed their teachers because they wrote fantastic biographies about Olaudah Equiano, a former slave who became free and went on to campaign against slavery for the rest of his life.

Tegan really worked on her spelling and use of WOW vocabulary which had a fantastic impact on her writing as a whole. She ensured that she used paragraphs to break up the key parts of his life and edited her work thoroughly too. Well done Tegan!

Archie has made a huge effort to concentrate in class and has ensured that he has followed the structure very carefully. Archie has also experimented with new words and this has made his biography on Olaudah Equiano a pleasure to read. Super work Archie!




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