Year 5 Star Writers - 26.01.18

The Star Writer in Willow class this week is Finley Redmond.  Finley used a great range of openers to vary his writing, adding interest for his reader. He also successfully used 'show not tell' throughout his writing to build imagery and engage his reader with Mai-ling's quest.

Maple's Star Writer this week is Timothy Dempsey.  Timothy spent considerable time evaluating the vocabulary he had used in his story and editing his writing to ensure it fully engaged his reader and gave a suitably gruesome depiction of the ogre!

This week's Star Writer for Elm Class is Mia Gallagher. Throughout her writing Mia has embedded a range of fronted adverbials to guide her reader through the story and show how time has moved on in the character's quest.