Emily has made a superb start to her non-chronological report on jaguars and has ensured that she has included all the key features such as relative clauses, exciting vocabulary and descriptive adjectives. Miss Chau is very impressed with her effort so far and cannot wait to read the finished version. Well done Emily!
Charlie has made a fantastic start to his non-chronological report on anacondas. He has used a range of openers, a relative clause and advanced punctuation. An excellent start Charlie and Mr Light cannot wait to read the rest.
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