Saturday 3 February 2018

Year 5 Star Writers - 02.02.18

Sky Griffiths is Maple's Star Writer this week, thanks to her dedication and imagination in creating her ogre story. Not only did Sky ensure she used a range of sentence types to create vivid descriptions for her reader, she also completed additional writing at home to develop her story!

This week in Elm Class, the Star Writer is Trinity Hawkes. Trinity has thought carefully when choosing her vocabulary to describe the mythical creature in her adventure story. She has used her imagination to ensure her writing is original and engaging for the reader.

In Willow Class this week, the Star Writer is David White. David independently created a fantastic story, using his imagination to successfully portray each scene within it. He embedded relative clauses to effectively add extra (appropriate) information.


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