Saturday, 10 February 2018
Year 5 Star Writers - 08.02.18
This week the Star Writer for Elm Class is Asroosh Valliani. He has written a precise and fantastic non-chronological report about his own mythical creature. He has considered his reader when using organisational features and selecting appropriate sentence types.
In Maple Class this week, the Star Writer is Adebare Olugbodi. He carefully considered which sentence types to use in order to create the most vivid description of his repugnant ogre! Adebare also ensured he moved the story on using the narrator's voice.
In Willow Class, the Star Writer is Sonia Lewis. This week, Sonia has produced a fantastic non-chronological report. She was precise, adding extra information which was relevant and sustained a formal tone throughout.
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Maple,
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Willow,
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