Monday, 22 January 2018

Year 5 Star Writers - 19.01.18

This week Elm Class's Star Writer is Daniel Tonu. Daniel has written a well thought through adventure story. He has considered how his word choices affect the reader and used a range of fronted adverbials to move the story on.  

This week in Willow Class, the Star Writer is Ranita Aryibi. Her adventure story oozed originality and used a range of sentence types to fully engage her reader.

In Maple Class, the Star Writer this week is Callum Watson.  He has carefully considered a range of different sentence types to increase the quality of his descriptive writing, ensuring his reader has a clear image of the hideousness of the ogre. 





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