Saturday, 16 September 2017

Willow class star writer

In Willow class, our star writer is the great Ayomade, after he produced an amazing story of his own based simply on an ambiguous picture of a boat. The children were presented with an awfully strange image, discussed their ideas and then developed their own stories around it. Ayomade titled his story the Elves and a Minotaur and showed he possesses natural authorial talents. He used a range of openers to vary his writing, included varied sentence structures and created vivid descriptions through the use of powerful adjectives. Keep up the great writing Ayomade.

Image used to brainstorm ideas 

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