Year 5 Star Writers

This week in Year 5, our star writers are: Haliya Gbadamosi, Sacha Raif and Lea Cerqueira.

Sacha made a fantastic start to his newspaper article, with careful consideration about the ordering of his lead paragraph. He evaluated his writing and edited it to improve the cohesion and ensure it hooked his readers' attention.

Similarly, Haliya made a great start on her newspaper article. A gripping subject to write about, Haliya successfully portrayed this in her lead paragraph briefly detailing the event. In her incident paragraph, she carefully selected appropriate sentence types, used parenthesis to add extra information and ensured she used a formal tone throughout. 

Lea has also started to produce her report on the stolen TES awards. She has carefully thought through and constructed her ideas into fluent and cohesive paragraphs, whilst ensuring she is able to sustain her audiences engagement throughout.

Inspiring writing Year 5, we look forward to reading your finished articles.