We have recently been studying the Victorian era across all
aspects of the curriculum. Fridays lesson involved writing a descriptive passage
about Pip stepping off the coach and arriving in London. This is what Ife
created:
Slowly, I walked out of the rusty carriage to an atmosphere
filled with busy crowded roads. I couldn’t see anything through the swarms of people. Huge
carriages were everywhere . I could feel the dust of the
carriages in my throat as I strolled down the street.
I could feel the calm, wintery breeze flowing through my
hair as the elegant birds were swimming in the blue sky. “Ah, what a wonderful
day!" I thought to myself. Nothing could ruin this day for me!
People were dashing rapidly trying to get to work. Unluckily
they could not move because it was too crowded. I was so starving I felt that I
could eat a hippopotamus! There was fruit on sale for 5p- wow that is cheap!!
I was coughing because of the smell of cigarettes that
lingered in the air- YUCK!
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