Elm's Star Writer

Congratulations to Deborah from Elm class for writing a non-chronological informative text on China. She worked hard to use technical 'wow' words, used powerful sentence openers to captivate the reader, and utilised adjectives to create strong images in our heads. For example when Deborah informed the reader about chinese celebrations she wrote, "Every spectacular year, Chinese families around the entire globe happily celebrate the lunar new year with vivid, vibrant fireworks and ear-splitting parties!" Well done Deborah!!!