Friday, 24 November 2017

Elm Star Writer - 24.11.17

This week in Elm Class, our star writer is David Basilio, who wrote a phenomenal diary entry  full of emotion and suspense. David has engaged his reader through using short and snappy sentences. He has used a range of powerful verbs and vivid descriptions to truly bring Billy's dilemma to life for the reader.

Well done David!





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