Sunday 11 March 2018

Year 5 Star Writers - 09.03.18

Maple's Star Writer this week is Henry Cruz Kokonchev. He carefully researched the life of the famous author Jeremy Strong, enabling him to write a successful biography that engages his reader. Using organisational features (such as subheadings) and relative clauses to add detail, Henry's writing was fabulous!

The Star Writer in Elm Class this week is Lucian Bundy. He has successfully produced a clear and informative biography about Jeremy Strong. Throughout his writing Lucian has used relative clauses to provide his reader with additional information and varied sentence types to engage the reader. 

Willow's Star Writer this week is Cruz Carey. Cruz produced a phenomenal biography on Jeremy Strong. He not only managed to use relative clauses to add extra information,  used a range of openers and appropriate subheadings, but he also embedded humour. A great biography Cruz!


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