This week our star writers in Year 6 were Lillie-Jo Guidotti and Lola-Mae Trinder.
Lillie has written a fantastic flashback story which she has really made her own with personalisation and humour. She also paid attention to her sentence structure and experimented with different sentence types too. Well done Lillie!
Lola has completed a brilliant flashback story and has used a range of openers to hook her reader in. She experimented with a range of sentence types, including 3-ed openers and paid extra attention to editing her spelling mistakes. Well done Lola!
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