Friday 20 October 2017

Willow class star writer

Our star writer in Willow class this week is the lovely Callie-Rose Barnett and it is no wonder given the fantastic set of instructions she produced on how to make sherbet. Successfully, Callie used a range of adverbials of time and manner to show her audience when and how to perform an action, selected appropriate imperative verbs to ensure her writing was precise and used brackets to embed extra information. A great piece of writing Callie, a pleasure to read. Keep it up!



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