Year 5 Star Writer

In Year 5 this week, our Star Writers are the wonderful Gavin and Frankie.

Both of the children worked incredibly hard to produce a fantastic introduction for their letter to Macbeth, persuading him to either kill or not to kill King Duncan (That is the question!) 

They took on board the features of persuasive writing, to ensure a gripping start to their letter. They successfully used flattery, personal pronouns and rhetorical questions to truly engage Macbeth with their writing and hopefully persuade him to side with their character.

Well done Gavin and Frankie, we can not wait to read your finished letter! 

Year 6 Star Writers

This week our star writers in Year 6 were Lillie-Jo Guidotti and Lola-Mae Trinder. 

Lillie has written a fantastic flashback story which she has really made her own with personalisation and humour. She also paid attention to her sentence structure and experimented with different sentence types too. Well done Lillie!

Lola has completed a brilliant flashback story and has used a range of openers to hook her reader in. She experimented with a range of sentence types, including 3-ed openers and paid extra attention to editing her spelling mistakes. Well done Lola!