Tuesday, 28 June 2022

Excellent Editing in Year 6 - 28.06.22

 



Recently, year 6 have been writing an alternative narrative based on our literacy text, 'Rooftoppers'. We were led into the depths of mystery as we uncovered that Sophie had spied a peculiar being amongst the Paris rooftops. What was that mysterious creature? Year 6 decided!

Each pupil planned their very own version of events once Sophie's eyes were met with the unknown. The children loved creating their storylines using specific literary skills to create tension and suspense.

After compiling their mystical pieces, the children then spent time to carefully edit and evaluate their work with their peers in order to improve and enhance their writing further.

"I'm going to make this a romance" - Zara, Lime



"I'm going to use ideas from the book 'Wonder' as well and say that the mysterious figure is a human boy with a disability and then Sophie becomes his friend by showing kindness and not judging him" - Tyler, Oak 

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