In lesson we looked back at our work to see where we could improve our own work. Uthman identified a section of his work where he told the reader what happened in his story instead of showing them. In re-writing this section Uthman really showed the audience what Guy of Gisborne was thinking and doing. By building a more detailed image in a readers mind Uthman allowed the reader to feel involved in his story.
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